Tuesday, August 21, 2012

chapter 1

one dark and stormy night lillly and james potter where standing at the window apperently verry frightened about somthing.lilly said "oh my gosh i realy hope he doesnt tell her it would be so horrible if he did i really wish whe hadnt switched secret keepers to peter. he is such a fool i really wish wede sticked with sirius he was so much better he would never sell us out to you-know-who."james told her "dont be so nervous peter would never sell us out he was one of my best friends at hogwarts. you really should get some sleep. come on im going to bed good night." lilly said "ok, would you put harry to bed for me please ill get lilly." "sure hun" they where just getting up when there was a knock on the door lilly screamed softly but james said " Dont worry its probbably just sirius" he went to the door but before he opened it lilly said carry your wand and check who it is first "ok" he said. he went to pick up his wand then he peeked through the hole and he saw who it was. he said "holly crap its her" lilly made this face -O- and screamed like this much "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh what the hell are we conna do this horrible oh my god im gonna die ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is so horrible oh my gosh waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa the children what will they do whithout us_________" "shhhhh shell hear usjust take the kids and run ok." she ran and picked up harry and lilly * but before she could get outthe back door voldemord got in the front  she was so pale she seemed to glow and her short blonde hair was in pigtails  she was wearing expensive blood red silk robes her eyes where red and looked like they belonged to a snakeand her nose was gone and replaced with two slits like a snakes noseshe sent a killing curse at jamesand he was dead lilly screamed and her face was like  ioi cuz she was crying alot aand voldemort said as friendly as she could but wasnt verry good at it "its to late for him im sorry i didnt mean to kill him its just a habit well now im here because my friend has found about a prophecy concerning me and your son and im going to need him and i will give you anything you want in return for him. do we have a deal?" but lilly was not going to give up harry that easily so she said "never you ar never going to get harry you twisted murderer!!!!" this made voldemort very mad but she chose to hide it she said calmly "you could make life much better for you and your daughter by joining me. i promise. hand over the boy or i will have to use force." "no t-take me instead!!!" "get out of the way silly girl!!!" "never!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "this is your last chance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1" i said never!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1" "avadaa kedavra!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" and with that lilly to was dead then voldemort turned to harry and said "good bye you stupid baby. avada kedavra."she was about to get lilly when the curse bounced back on her and she was nearly dead but she could crawl away  into the forest to hide.

ok the chapter is over i kno its short but i cant write any more right now so i will post next one tomorrow unless sombody emails me about it or a comment ya do comment i need 5 fake dollors or u have to wait bye
annmarie
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writer\artiste

Wednesday, August 1, 2012

notes

Hi Everyone.
I wanted to tell you things about this before I start writing the book. First is that this just me rewriting what harry potter would be like if Voldemort was a girl and Harry Potter had a sister named Lilly. Second I think that you might confuse Lilly for her mom so I'm going to type it like this, Lilly*. So that's about it for this post so im going to start writing right now.
Bye!

P.S. I'm gonna make voldemort like Azula from avatar the last airbender ,calm but deadly =D